I was blessed to live in the
time of trains:
dark diesel dinosaurs lumbering
across my summer nights
where the whisper of their passing
winds in through my open window
like a silken ribbon tying up
my past and present.
Their vibration so faint
I strain to catch the fragrant sound
and in the darkening stillness
accept the gifts they bring of
memory and peace.
Beautiful imagery! Twice in my life, I’ve lived near train tracks. You’d think it was annoying, but it actually can be quite comforting. Must be something about the predictability…
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Thank you, and I think you must be right. Thankfully they are far enough away to be peaceful and soothing.
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Amazing! Your poem brings me right back to my grandparents’ house … staying there in the summer, hot summer nights with windows open, hearing the lull of the train pass by. Just beautiful. So happy you wrote today!
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Thank you Michelle! I loved your comment. I was considering also writing about staying in my grandparents house in Ft. Thomas, Kentucky and listening to the gentle swish of the car tires passing on the pavement. It was magical and that sound always takes me right back. I love it!
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I think of visiting our friends in Wyoming and hearing the trains rumble through, staring as a murmur in the far distance and growing and growing until they whisked by.
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Thank you for writing and sharing. It’s neat to hear from other people who share the experience.
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Woah, this is beautiful. I love this phrase: dark diesel dinosaurs. I actually went back and read that part aloud. Beautiful.
This could be in a picture book!
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Thank you for your kind words! It was fun to write.
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